Do you agree or disagree with the statement? (Introduction) - Владимир vs Данил
1. People should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts.
2. It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics.
3. There is nothing that young people can teach older people.
4. Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more enjoyable than watching movies.
5. Only people who earn a lot of money are successful.
Работа в паре.
Первая сторона на указанную формулировку пишет введение эссе/первый абзац (1-2 предложения), которое
1. определяет позицию
2. формулирует позицию
3. поясняет, почему выбрана именно такая позиция,
Вторая сторона предлагает свой вариант п.2 и/или п.3, чтобы введение стало более сфокусированным на предмете формулировки, стало более связным и последовательным для дальнейшего изложения доводов, после чего пишет введение следующей формулировки.
Образец:
People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different.
Первая сторона предлагает свое видение введения на предложенную формулировку:
I do not believe that people are never satisfied with what they have and that they always want something more or something different, because sometimes people are satisfied with what they have and sometimes they not always want something more or something different.
Вторая сторона отыскивает изъяны (если они имеются) в сфокусированности на предмете формулировки, а также в связности и последовательности для дальнейшего изложения доводов:
I do not believe that people are never satisfied with what they have and that they always want something more or something different, because it would be abnormal of people to be always dissatisfied with what they have.
Discussion
1.I do not think that people should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts,because sometimes people just want to read about things that cannot happen in a real world.
I do not think that people should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts, because it would lead to social inadequacy in the behavior of the person deprived of fiction.
I do not agree to the idea that it is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics. It would have harmful consequences both on the studens and on the people around them, if they develop such one sidedness.
I don't agree that it is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics.If humanity would study only history and literature then our world wouldn't be so high-technical like it is now.
I do… agree that there is nothing that young people can teach older people.I think like that because young people can have more experience in new-tech areas than older people have ,so they can help to older people comprehend the tech.
I do not agree that there is nothing that young people can teach older people, because young people can have more experience in new-tech areas than older people have ,so they can help to … older people … comprehend the tech.
I do not agree that there is nothing that young people can teach older people, because young people can have more experience in new-tech areas than older people have ,so they can help to some older people to comprehend the tech.
I do not agree that there is nothing that young people can teach older people, because young people can have more experience in new-tech areas than older people have ,so they can help some older people to comprehend the tech.
I do not agree that there is nothing that young people because young people have grasped updated moral norms and if they are not transferred to other generations it will be bad for the whole community.
I do not think that reading novels and short stories is more enjoyable than watching movies as there are a lot of people who have not developed abstract thinking and imagination and who enjoy ready-made images.
Also mainly books are more enjoyable than movies are, I do beleive the answer on the question is dependent on individual liking of …certain person.
I don't think that only people who earn a lot of money are successful, because success is not mainly about money,but about some kind of power. And the power can be got not only through money.
Even if in most times books are more enjoyable than movies are, I do beleive the answer to the question is dependent on individual liking of a certain person.
I don't think that only people who earn a lot of money are successful, because success is not mainly about money,but about some kind of power.And I believe that the power can be got not only through money - здесь лучше поменять деятеля и объект местами.
Even if in most times books are more enjoyable than movies are, I do beleive the answer to the question is depending on individual liking of a certain person.
I don't think that only people who earn a lot of money are successful, because success is not mainly about money,but about some kind of power.I believe that not only through money the power can be got.
Even if in most times books are more enjoyable than movies are, I do beleive the answer to the question depends on individual liking of a certain person.
I don't think that only people who earn a lot of money are successful, because success is not mainly about money,but about some kind of power.I believe that not only money provide… the power.
Even if in most times books are more enjoyable than movies are, I do beleive the answer to the question depends on individual liking of a certain person.
I don't think that only people who earn a lot of money are successful, because success is not mainly about money,but about some kind of power.I believe that not only money provides the power.
I don't think that the people who earn a lot of money are successful and those people who do not earn a lot of maney are not because money is not the index of success.