Could you take a look?
Can you see if is something wrong?

The driver wound down her window and leand across.
The driver moved her window downwards by turning the handle and inclined herself across the front seat.

Through Frederic's mind went a simple formula.
Frederic imagined a simple formula.

Work brings money
I(Frederic) can earn money through the work

Frederick bend down and ran his hand over the tyre.
Frederick leaned closer to the ground, placed his hand on the tyre and made a sliding movement.

You must have picked it up along the way
Probably you have ridden over the piece while you were riding.

Then he pulled a large piece of glass out of the wheel and held it up.

Then he withdrew a large piece of glass from the wheel and showed it to her.

He hung up his jacket,jacked up the car,took off the flat tire and put on the spare wheel.

He laid his jacket on the side mirror,set the car in a higher position and replaced the flat tire with the spare wheel.

Frederick walked to the back of the car and opened up the boot. Then he took out the spare wheel, a tool kit, a jack, and a pump.

Frederick walked to the back of the car and opened the boot by pulling it upwards. Then he drew the spare wheel, a tool kit, a jack, and a pump from the boot.

Frederic nodded,smiled and held out his hand.
Frederic nodded,smiled and made a gesture hinting … lady to pay him.

He took off his jacket, hung it up on one of the wing mirrors, jacked up the car, took off the flat tyre, put on the spare wheel which he then pupmed up a little, and finally, having done all that, he put the old wheel, the toolkit, the jack and the pump back in the boot.

He removed his jacket, hung it on one of the wing mirrors, raised the car using the jack, removed the flat tyre, installed the spare wheel which he then filled with air a little using the pump, and finally, having done all that, he placed the old wheel, the toolkit, the jack and the pump in the boot.

Now can I give you a lift anywhere?I'm on my way to Birmingham.Perhaps I can drop you off somewhere along the way.

Can I drive you anywhere?I'm riding to Birmingham.I can leave you where you want along the way

You've been so kind. Fregeric nodded, smiled and held out his hand.
Fregeric nodded, smiled and extended his hand towards her.

Frederic's face dropped. He'd been expecting money or food and he felt a bit let down.
Frederic's face dropped. He'd been expecting money or food and he felt disappointed.

But it suddenly dawned on him that the offer of a free ride in a Rolls-Royce far away from Newtown might be a quite good idea.
But he suddenly realized that the offer of a free ride in a Rolls-Royce far away from Newtown might be a quite good idea.

The woman got in,put on her seat belt, took off the handbrake, put the car into a first gear, looked in the rear view mirror,and pulled gently out of the layby.
The woman sat in the car, fix herself in her seat with a seat belt, switch off the handbrake, switch the car's gear into a first gear,looked in the rear view mirror,and gently started a ride out of the layby

And then - with a sudden burst of speed - they roared onto the M1 motorway like a bullet from a gun.

And then - with a sudden burst of speed - they drove very fast onto the M1 motorway making a lot of noise like a bullet from a gun.