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Obj + Subj + would want to model + obj + after - Алеша vs Владимир

По цепочке по речевой модели трансформируйте 10 предложенных друг другу высказываний.

Образец,

I want to be as successful as he is. → He is the person I would want to model my success after.

Discussion

Vladimir LopatinVladimir Lopatin, 2017/06/10 20:26, 2017/06/10 20:26

My dream is to sing as beatifully as Katy Perry.

AlexAlex, 2017/06/11 21:26, 2017/06/11 21:47

Katy Perry is the person I would want to model my singing skills after.

Many children want to do heroic deeds like Superman

Vladimir LopatinVladimir Lopatin, 2017/06/17 23:20, 2017/10/31 17:46

Superman is the person character many children would want to model their heroic deeds after.

Russians want to make their holidays similar to American ones.

AlexAlex, 2017/06/18 23:14, 2017/10/31 07:55

American holidays is the model (are the things) (days) Russians would want to model their ones (theirs) after.

I would like us to learn a lot from each other.

Vladimir LopatinVladimir Lopatin, 2017/06/20 23:27

Кто здесь кумир и для кого, чтобы я мог применить модель?

AlexAlex, 2017/06/21 01:11, 2017/06/21 01:31

переделал: We both want to learn a lot from each other

Vladimir LopatinVladimir Lopatin, 2017/06/21 22:18

У меня не получается. Как ты бы сделал?

AlexAlex, 2017/06/23 00:19, 2017/07/14 22:42

Мой вариант: Each of us two is the person the other would want to model a lot after ← с местоимениями путаница - не понятно, кто на ком стоит (ЮН)

Each one of us is the person the other one would want to model a lot after.

Vladimir LopatinVladimir Lopatin, 2017/06/27 16:14, 2017/06/27 16:14

Ясно, :), у меня бы так точно уж не получилось.

Every girl's dream is to be as beautiful as Angelina Jolie.

AlexAlex, 2017/06/28 02:04, 2017/07/15 23:31

Angelina Jolie is the person every girl would want to model her look (appearance)after. ← looks = appearance (ЮН)

I want to paint like Raphael and compose like Bach.

Vladimir LopatinVladimir Lopatin, 2017/07/15 23:39, 2017/07/15 23:44

Raphael is the person I would want to model my painting technique after and Bach is the person I would want to model my composing technique after.

When I was a child, I wanted to be as strong as my father.

AlexAlex, 2017/08/11 22:18, 2017/10/26 19:43

When I was a child my father was the person I would have wanted (would wanted) (would want) to model my strength after.

Some parents have a lot to learn from the heroes of the series to become the authority for their child.

Vladimir LopatinVladimir Lopatin, 2017/08/14 22:27, 2017/08/14 22:28

The heroes of the series are the people some parents would want to model the authority for their children after.

She wanted to help people as Mother Teresa.

AlexAlex, 2017/08/27 15:31, 2017/10/26 19:43

(the heroes of the series are not just people )

Mother Teresa was the person she would wanted (would want) to model her helpfulness after.

I wanted to learn to count in my mind as quickly as a calculator.

Vladimir LopatinVladimir Lopatin, 2017/08/27 20:54, 2017/09/21 19:55

(I do not agree because heroes of series are performed by people and the viewers fuse the heroes and the people.)

A calculator was the thing I would want to model its ability to count quickly after.

Children, even when they do not want to copy their parents' relationships, still subconsciously do.

AlexAlex, 2017/09/12 18:47, 2017/10/26 21:25

Parents are the people their children would not want to model their relationships after but they still subconsciously do. ← Не сохранена исходная мысль - дети не копируют отношения родителей
(Я исходную мысль перевел так: “Дети, даже если они и не хотят воспроизводить родительские взаимоотношения, все равно неосознанно делают это)

Imitating adults in their bad habits teenagers often think that this will make them as free (as adults).

Vladimir LopatinVladimir Lopatin, 2017/09/21 20:13, 2017/09/21 20:15

Аdults in their bad habits are the people teenagers would want to model their freedom after.

Many girls want to be able to speak with animals like Snowhite or Cinderella.

AlexAlex, 2017/09/22 20:43, 2017/10/26 19:45

Snowhite as well as Cinderella are the characters many girls would want to model their animal-speak (animal-speaking) ability after.

Whoever have solved this task we will follow his method.

Vladimir LopatinVladimir Lopatin, 2017/09/22 21:59, 2017/10/26 21:30

Whoever has solved this task is the person we would want to model this task solution method after.

Every street-walker dreams to copy the life of the hooker performed by Julia Roberts in the film Pretty Woman.

AlexAlex, 2017/09/22 23:12, 2017/10/26 22:03

Мой вариант: The person who have solved this task is the one we would want to model his task solution method after.

Julia Roberts' main character life in the film Pretty Woman is the thing every street-walker we would want to model after.

The hooker in the film Pretty Woman performed by Julia Roberts is the person every street-walker would want to model her life after.

Young actors learn their craft following Stanislavski's system with the help of more experienced colleagues.

Yuri ScherbakovYuri Scherbakov, 2017/10/24 06:08

Correction welcome.

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